tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25895692.post4487560568434178943..comments2023-10-15T05:01:43.528-07:00Comments on Bamboo Killers: Open script: People on a raftEmily Blakehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02163221455899041141noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25895692.post-68731212631760044012009-09-27T16:21:21.152-07:002009-09-27T16:21:21.152-07:00That's pretty good, but I intentionally chose ...That's pretty good, but I intentionally chose to open with the image of the gun.Emily Blakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02163221455899041141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25895692.post-23104244400050475912009-09-26T20:19:03.271-07:002009-09-26T20:19:03.271-07:00Thank you Emily!
Not very many have the courage t...Thank you Emily!<br /><br />Not very many have the courage to show their work to the world.<br /><br />Had you considered this opening:<br /><br />EXT. LIFE RAFT - DAY<br /><br />PENNY, 23, tiny and birdlike and sunburned in her bikini, which could be why she shakes. <br /><br />It could also be the gun to her temple.Karelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01894787076761192228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25895692.post-18776152999087988152009-09-22T09:49:59.063-07:002009-09-22T09:49:59.063-07:00I have ti in Scrippets already. Is it not reading ...I have ti in Scrippets already. Is it not reading that way on your computer? Are you in Firefox?Emily Blakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02163221455899041141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25895692.post-82543629138437779892009-09-22T02:30:26.144-07:002009-09-22T02:30:26.144-07:00http://scrippets.org/blogger.htmlhttp://scrippets.org/blogger.htmlwcmartellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18075242897910568801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25895692.post-13940561912581556032009-09-21T23:42:40.769-07:002009-09-21T23:42:40.769-07:00Cool. I posted mine, too.
http://potentialisamusc...Cool. I posted mine, too.<br /><br />http://potentialisamuscle.blogspot.com/2009/09/drama.html<br /><br />Yeah, there's two. I paid twice. I love this shit. If I get an illiterate judge again, though, someone's getting a reading lesson---in their ass.<br />-JeffJeff Pulicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10557790577435036365noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25895692.post-30613837593871522482009-09-21T11:51:07.820-07:002009-09-21T11:51:07.820-07:00I'm not sure what you mean by "longer dia...I'm not sure what you mean by "longer dialogue"Emily Blakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02163221455899041141noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25895692.post-5559607247478497112009-09-21T11:50:12.224-07:002009-09-21T11:50:12.224-07:00I thought the scene was really funny, nice job wit...I thought the scene was really funny, nice job with the reveal and then gunshot. <br /><br />Just curious, but do you generally trend more towards the longer dialogue, or is it an artifact of writing the piece so quickly?Michael F.http://www.scriptawish.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25895692.post-91376818249286981172009-09-21T11:45:31.251-07:002009-09-21T11:45:31.251-07:00Only a thunderstorm and some sharks were missing.Only a thunderstorm and some sharks were missing.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-25895692.post-16828881472282411532009-09-21T09:45:11.659-07:002009-09-21T09:45:11.659-07:00Thanks!
Good luck with your entry, too!Thanks!<br /><br />Good luck with your entry, too!Emily Blakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02163221455899041141noreply@blogger.com